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BlueLotus
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Joined: 12 Jan 2007
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Location: Kyoto Japan
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 8:56 am Post subject: TREAD LIGHTLY
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I hate having to say good bye to you,
I am going to miss you so much.
I want you to know that even when
we are not together,I leave a big part
of me with you.
It is yours now,so,take care and
tread lightly.
I wish that I could be with you now
as you face so many exciting new experiences,
but know that I am there in spilit,
I believe in you and know that everything is going
to work out for you.
No matter where this life takes us,
together or not, know that you will
always be in my heart.
Love always
P.M. I wrote this poem on Mar.12,2007
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nuttyone
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Location: australia
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:41 am Post subject:
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Ohhh Blue that is so sweet your poems are from the heart i like them I also notice that your english is getting better, your doing very well .
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BlueLotus
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 6:20 pm Post subject:
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nuttyone wrote: |
Ohhh Blue that is so sweet your poems are from the heart i like them I also notice that your english is getting better, your doing very well . |
Thank you so much. I always write poems. I received a prize a years ago. My poems are all of my life!
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Hemlock
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Location: Georgian Bay
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 9:28 pm Post subject:
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I love free spirits because I cannot be one.
Very interesting work.
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suzanne
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Location: Toronto
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 9:54 pm Post subject:
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hmmmmmm....please explain.......why is it that you don't allow yourself to free your spirit????................it is incredibly liberating.......as long as you know how to ground yourself when neccesary. Try......
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Manon
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 1:39 pm Post subject:
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Nice Blue!
I also write poetry...and study it with my students. It is a beautiful method of free expression. I believe underneath all poetry is either one of three emotions...LOVE, FEAR, or PAIN...and oh, how I prefer to write about LOVE...as poetry, it is beautiful and free...and will forever be...
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"Wherever you go, go with all your heart."
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Hemlock
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:06 pm Post subject:
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I dont consider it a deficiency - For whatever reason I am heavily programmed for analytical behaviour.
I love free spirits because they are different from me and I find them interesting - not because I think they enjoy life more or get more out of being alive than I do.
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